Sunday, March 29, 2009

Let's Build the Estafet Story

Get bored to build your story into some piece of art by yourself?
OK then, come and join with me to build the estafet story, I think it's fun.

RULES:

  1. The story will be written in English as a primary language
    (The other language is permitted, but not as primary language)

  2. Each person can only give 1 sentence to continue the latest sequence of story.
    (A sentence is characterized by which is ended with punctuation as follows:
    - periode "."
    - question mark "?"
    - exclamation mark "!"
    except if it is the dialog sentence (direct speech) that is spoken by a person, it is permitted to finish the dialog sentence by ignoring the punctuation of sentence.)

  3. The genre of the story is undefined, let it flows as it is.

  4. To continue the story, please copy and paste first the whole story and then append your sentence, after that you can post it as comment.

  5. It is forbidden to append your sentence consecutively with more than one comment, because it is estafet. Let the other person continue what you write.



Dare you to write our story? Ok then, let's the story begin....



07.00

51 comments:

-rizka- said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night.

Eriek Sobieski said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before.

-rizka- said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night.
To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony.

dindun said...

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night.
To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony.
Suddenly, the door is opened.

Eriek Sobieski said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night.
To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony.
Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door.

-rizka- said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night.
To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before.
The nightmare of despair and undefined agony.Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses.

dindun said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night.
To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before.
The nightmare of despair and undefined agony.
Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

UuL said...
This comment has been removed by the author.
UuL said...

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night.
To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before.
The nightmare of despair and undefined agony.
Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"
"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face

Eriek Sobieski said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before.
The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

-rizka- said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before.
The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

dindun said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before.
The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walk out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast"

Eriek Sobieski said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

-rizka- said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something.

dindun said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like.

UuL said...

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like.

Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

-rizka- said...

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like.

Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me. "Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon.

Eriek Sobieski said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.

dindun said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

UuL said...

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.
"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared"

-rizka- said...

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.
"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Eriek Sobieski said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face.

UuL said...

Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before.

dindun said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."

-rizka- said...

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

TiaR IndaH said...

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."

UuL said...

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."

i try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy....wondering where am i right now?

dindun said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy....wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

Eriek Sobieski said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

-rizka- said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

UuL said...

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Eriek Sobieski said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly?

-rizka- said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

UuL said...

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

I run into toilet after my mom out from my room, and got shocked for reflection on the mirror..Gosh...it's Alley's face on the mirror, not me.

Eriek Sobieski said...

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

I run into toilet after my mom out from my room, and got shocked for reflection on the mirror.. Gosh...it's Alley's face on the mirror, not me. Spontaneously I insert my hand into my pants, "Holy shit, even I lost my little brother"

dindun said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

I run into toilet after my mom out from my room, and got shocked for reflection on the mirror.. Gosh...it's Alley's face on the mirror, not me. Spontaneously I insert my hand into my pants, "Holy shit, even I lost my little brother"
I walk out from toilet, get back to my room, try to look more carefully every point of this room and found that this is not my room, I didn't recognize this room at all, "Oh my God......"

-rizka- said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

I run into toilet after my mom out from my room, and got shocked for reflection on the mirror.. Gosh...it's Alley's face on the mirror, not me. Spontaneously I insert my hand into my pants, "Holy shit, even I lost my little brother"
I walk out from toilet, get back to my room, try to look more carefully every point of this room and found that this is not my room, I didn't recognize this room at all, "Oh my God......".
"Where am I? Who am I? Ain't I River? Am I dreaming?", I poke my own cheek and..."Ouch..it's real then. What happened to me?"

UuL said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

I run into toilet after my mom out from my room, and got shocked for reflection on the mirror.. Gosh...it's Alley's face on the mirror, not me. Spontaneously I insert my hand into my pants, "Holy shit, even I lost my little brother"
I walk out from toilet, get back to my room, try to look more carefully every point of this room and found that this is not my room, I didn't recognize this room at all, "Oh my God......".
"Where am I? Who am I? Ain't I River? Am I dreaming?", I poke my own cheek and..."Ouch..it's real then. What happened to me?"

In between my confusion, Mommy's shouting
"Alley...it's almost 8 o'clock. You'll be late to school. Don't makes me come to your room again"

Eriek Sobieski said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

I run into toilet after my mom out from my room, and got shocked for reflection on the mirror.. Gosh...it's Alley's face on the mirror, not me. Spontaneously I insert my hand into my pants, "Holy shit, even I lost my little brother"
I walk out from toilet, get back to my room, try to look more carefully every point of this room and found that this is not my room, I didn't recognize this room at all, "Oh my God......".

"Where am I? Who am I? Ain't I River? Am I dreaming?", I poke my own cheek and..."Ouch..it's real then. What happened to me?"

In between my confusion, Mommy's shouting "Alley...it's almost 8 o'clock. You'll be late to school. Don't makes me come to your room again"

I shout like a girl, "Okay, Moooom," before my feet move on, I realize something in my window reflection, I groan deeply in a boy's voice, "Oh, my God! It's me. I can see myself there, River! So where is Alley now?"

Elly Kusnadi said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

I run into toilet after my mom out from my room, and got shocked for reflection on the mirror.. Gosh...it's Alley's face on the mirror, not me. Spontaneously I insert my hand into my pants, "Holy shit, even I lost my little brother"
I walk out from toilet, get back to my room, try to look more carefully every point of this room and found that this is not my room, I didn't recognize this room at all, "Oh my God......".

"Where am I? Who am I? Ain't I River? Am I dreaming?", I poke my own cheek and..."Ouch..it's real then. What happened to me?"

In between my confusion, Mommy's shouting "Alley...it's almost 8 o'clock. You'll be late to school. Don't makes me come to your room again"

I shout like a girl, "Okay, Moooom," before my feet move on, I realize something in my window reflection, I groan deeply in a boy's voice, "Oh, my God! It's me. I can see myself there, River! So where is Alley now?"

And i see that reflection in front of me, a young-tall-guy with a pale face and that brown dangling hair standing there and those eyes green weary eyes..they stare at me, as if asking me for help. "who are you??" i forced myself to ask him, but all i can hear is a deep boy voice and i still see him, pronouces the words that i say. "River.." i can't stop my lip saying that. but those eyes..

-rizka- said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

I run into toilet after my mom out from my room, and got shocked for reflection on the mirror.. Gosh...it's Alley's face on the mirror, not me. Spontaneously I insert my hand into my pants, "Holy shit, even I lost my little brother"
I walk out from toilet, get back to my room, try to look more carefully every point of this room and found that this is not my room, I didn't recognize this room at all, "Oh my God......".

"Where am I? Who am I? Ain't I River? Am I dreaming?", I poke my own cheek and..."Ouch..it's real then. What happened to me?"

In between my confusion, Mommy's shouting "Alley...it's almost 8 o'clock. You'll be late to school. Don't makes me come to your room again"

I shout like a girl, "Okay, Moooom," before my feet move on, I realize something in my window reflection, I groan deeply in a boy's voice, "Oh, my God! It's me. I can see myself there, River! So where is Alley now?"

And i see that reflection in front of me, a young-tall-guy with a pale face and that brown dangling hair standing there and those eyes green weary eyes..they stare at me, as if asking me for help. "who are you??" i forced myself to ask him, but all i can hear is a deep boy voice and i still see him, pronouces the words that i say. "River.." i can't stop my lip saying that. but those eyes..

"River..." the whispering sound fills my head..i want to move my feet on, but i stand still, cannot resist the green eyes glare.

Eriek Sobieski said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

I run into toilet after my mom out from my room, and got shocked for reflection on the mirror.. Gosh...it's Alley's face on the mirror, not me. Spontaneously I insert my hand into my pants, "Holy shit, even I lost my little brother"
I walk out from toilet, get back to my room, try to look more carefully every point of this room and found that this is not my room, I didn't recognize this room at all, "Oh my God......".

"Where am I? Who am I? Ain't I River? Am I dreaming?", I poke my own cheek and..."Ouch..it's real then. What happened to me?"

In between my confusion, Mommy's shouting "Alley...it's almost 8 o'clock. You'll be late to school. Don't makes me come to your room again"

I shout like a girl, "Okay, Moooom," before my feet move on, I realize something in my window reflection, I groan deeply in a boy's voice, "Oh, my God! It's me. I can see myself there, River! So where is Alley now?"

And i see that reflection in front of me, a young-tall-guy with a pale face and that brown dangling hair standing there and those eyes green weary eyes..they stare at me, as if asking me for help. "who are you??" i forced myself to ask him, but all i can hear is a deep boy voice and i still see him, pronouces the words that i say. "River.." i can't stop my lip saying that. but those eyes..

"River..." the whispering sound fills my head..i want to move my feet on, but i stand still, cannot resist the green eyes glare.

"River, are you okay?" Mom's voice behind my back surprises me a lot, "I think you're not okay. Better see the doctor soon," she grasps my hand tightly as if she wants to detect my sickness.

ngupil itu indah said...

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

I run into toilet after my mom out from my room, and got shocked for reflection on the mirror.. Gosh...it's Alley's face on the mirror, not me. Spontaneously I insert my hand into my pants, "Holy shit, even I lost my little brother"
I walk out from toilet, get back to my room, try to look more carefully every point of this room and found that this is not my room, I didn't recognize this room at all, "Oh my God......".

"Where am I? Who am I? Ain't I River? Am I dreaming?", I poke my own cheek and..."Ouch..it's real then. What happened to me?"

In between my confusion, Mommy's shouting "Alley...it's almost 8 o'clock. You'll be late to school. Don't makes me come to your room again"

I shout like a girl, "Okay, Moooom," before my feet move on, I realize something in my window reflection, I groan deeply in a boy's voice, "Oh, my God! It's me. I can see myself there, River! So where is Alley now?"

And i see that reflection in front of me, a young-tall-guy with a pale face and that brown dangling hair standing there and those eyes green weary eyes..they stare at me, as if asking me for help. "who are you??" i forced myself to ask him, but all i can hear is a deep boy voice and i still see him, pronouces the words that i say. "River.." i can't stop my lip saying that. but those eyes..

"River..." the whispering sound fills my head..i want to move my feet on, but i stand still, cannot resist the green eyes glare.

"River, are you okay?" Mom's voice behind my back surprises me a lot, "I think you're not okay. Better see the doctor soon," she grasps my hand tightly as if she wants to detect my sickness.

"My God, River, you...you...don't have any pulse in your hand..?!!"

UuL said...

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

I run into toilet after my mom out from my room, and got shocked for reflection on the mirror.. Gosh...it's Alley's face on the mirror, not me. Spontaneously I insert my hand into my pants, "Holy shit, even I lost my little brother"
I walk out from toilet, get back to my room, try to look more carefully every point of this room and found that this is not my room, I didn't recognize this room at all, "Oh my God......".

"Where am I? Who am I? Ain't I River? Am I dreaming?", I poke my own cheek and..."Ouch..it's real then. What happened to me?"

In between my confusion, Mommy's shouting "Alley...it's almost 8 o'clock. You'll be late to school. Don't makes me come to your room again"

I shout like a girl, "Okay, Moooom," before my feet move on, I realize something in my window reflection, I groan deeply in a boy's voice, "Oh, my God! It's me. I can see myself there, River! So where is Alley now?"

And i see that reflection in front of me, a young-tall-guy with a pale face and that brown dangling hair standing there and those eyes green weary eyes..they stare at me, as if asking me for help. "who are you??" i forced myself to ask him, but all i can hear is a deep boy voice and i still see him, pronouces the words that i say. "River.." i can't stop my lip saying that. but those eyes..

"River..." the whispering sound fills my head..i want to move my feet on, but i stand still, cannot resist the green eyes glare.

"River, are you okay?" Mom's voice behind my back surprises me a lot, "I think you're not okay. Better see the doctor soon," she grasps my hand tightly as if she wants to detect my sickness.

"My God, River, you...you...don't have any pulse in your hand..?!!"

I feel shocked for a second and then laugh so loud till i forgot the whispering for a moment
"Moomm...that's because you're holding the wrong part of my hand, there's no any pulse in people's arm"

Eriek Sobieski said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

I run into toilet after my mom out from my room, and got shocked for reflection on the mirror.. Gosh...it's Alley's face on the mirror, not me. Spontaneously I insert my hand into my pants, "Holy shit, even I lost my little brother"
I walk out from toilet, get back to my room, try to look more carefully every point of this room and found that this is not my room, I didn't recognize this room at all, "Oh my God......".

"Where am I? Who am I? Ain't I River? Am I dreaming?", I poke my own cheek and..."Ouch..it's real then. What happened to me?"

In between my confusion, Mommy's shouting "Alley...it's almost 8 o'clock. You'll be late to school. Don't makes me come to your room again"

I shout like a girl, "Okay, Moooom," before my feet move on, I realize something in my window reflection, I groan deeply in a boy's voice, "Oh, my God! It's me. I can see myself there, River! So where is Alley now?"

And i see that reflection in front of me, a young-tall-guy with a pale face and that brown dangling hair standing there and those eyes green weary eyes..they stare at me, as if asking me for help. "who are you??" i forced myself to ask him, but all i can hear is a deep boy voice and i still see him, pronouces the words that i say. "River.." i can't stop my lip saying that. but those eyes..

"River..." the whispering sound fills my head..i want to move my feet on, but i stand still, cannot resist the green eyes glare.

"River, are you okay?" Mom's voice behind my back surprises me a lot, "I think you're not okay. Better see the doctor soon," she grasps my hand tightly as if she wants to detect my sickness.

"My God, River, you...you...don't have any pulse in your hand..?!!"

I feel shocked for a second and then laugh so loud till i forgot the whispering for a moment, "Moomm...that's because you're holding the wrong part of my hand, there's no any pulse in people's arm."

"Ooops, it's a mistake," Mom looks too worry about me, "But your face is pale, Alley! Are you okay?"

Elly Kusnadi said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

I run into toilet after my mom out from my room, and got shocked for reflection on the mirror.. Gosh...it's Alley's face on the mirror, not me. Spontaneously I insert my hand into my pants, "Holy shit, even I lost my little brother"
I walk out from toilet, get back to my room, try to look more carefully every point of this room and found that this is not my room, I didn't recognize this room at all, "Oh my God......".

"Where am I? Who am I? Ain't I River? Am I dreaming?", I poke my own cheek and..."Ouch..it's real then. What happened to me?"

In between my confusion, Mommy's shouting "Alley...it's almost 8 o'clock. You'll be late to school. Don't makes me come to your room again"

I shout like a girl, "Okay, Moooom," before my feet move on, I realize something in my window reflection, I groan deeply in a boy's voice, "Oh, my God! It's me. I can see myself there, River! So where is Alley now?"

And i see that reflection in front of me, a young-tall-guy with a pale face and that brown dangling hair standing there and those eyes green weary eyes..they stare at me, as if asking me for help. "who are you??" i forced myself to ask him, but all i can hear is a deep boy voice and i still see him, pronounces the words that i say. "River.." i can't stop my lip saying that. but those eyes..

"River..." the whispering sound fills my head..i want to move my feet on, but i stand still, cannot resist the green eyes glare.

"River, are you okay?" Mom's voice behind my back surprises me a lot, "I think you're not okay. Better see the doctor soon," she grasps my hand tightly as if she wants to detect my sickness.

"My God, River, you...you...don't have any pulse in your hand..?!!"

I feel shocked for a second and then laugh so loud till i forgot the whispering for a moment, "Moomm...that's because you're holding the wrong part of my hand, there's no any pulse in people's arm."

"Ooops, it's a mistake," Mom looks too worry about me, "But your face is pale, Alley! Are you okay?"
‘Alley?’… what is it now…. I think this disease is contagious.. n now it’s my mom’s turn.. “Mom are you okay?” I chocked up,, what is wrong with my voice… I sound more like screaming now. “Alley honnie… I think we’d better get the doctor soon” said my mom now touching my forehead. “Mom.. I’m river… not alley” I scream one more time and now I sound like “laura love”. “Come on… we gotta go now” my mom loses her temper and pull me out of the room. When I pass the mirror next to my cupboard… I saw my mom is walking with a blonde pony-tailed girl.

dindun said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

I run into toilet after my mom out from my room, and got shocked for reflection on the mirror.. Gosh...it's Alley's face on the mirror, not me. Spontaneously I insert my hand into my pants, "Holy shit, even I lost my little brother"
I walk out from toilet, get back to my room, try to look more carefully every point of this room and found that this is not my room, I didn't recognize this room at all, "Oh my God......".

"Where am I? Who am I? Ain't I River? Am I dreaming?", I poke my own cheek and..."Ouch..it's real then. What happened to me?"

In between my confusion, Mommy's shouting "Alley...it's almost 8 o'clock. You'll be late to school. Don't makes me come to your room again"

I shout like a girl, "Okay, Moooom," before my feet move on, I realize something in my window reflection, I groan deeply in a boy's voice, "Oh, my God! It's me. I can see myself there, River! So where is Alley now?"

And i see that reflection in front of me, a young-tall-guy with a pale face and that brown dangling hair standing there and those eyes green weary eyes..they stare at me, as if asking me for help. "who are you??" i forced myself to ask him, but all i can hear is a deep boy voice and i still see him, pronounces the words that i say. "River.." i can't stop my lip saying that. but those eyes..

"River..." the whispering sound fills my head..i want to move my feet on, but i stand still, cannot resist the green eyes glare.

"River, are you okay?" Mom's voice behind my back surprises me a lot, "I think you're not okay. Better see the doctor soon," she grasps my hand tightly as if she wants to detect my sickness.

"My God, River, you...you...don't have any pulse in your hand..?!!"

I feel shocked for a second and then laugh so loud till i forgot the whispering for a moment, "Moomm...that's because you're holding the wrong part of my hand, there's no any pulse in people's arm."

"Ooops, it's a mistake," Mom looks too worry about me, "But your face is pale, Alley! Are you okay?"
‘Alley?’… what is it now…. I think this disease is contagious.. n now it’s my mom’s turn.. “Mom are you okay?” I chocked up,, what is wrong with my voice… I sound more like screaming now. “Alley honnie… I think we’d better get the doctor soon” said my mom now touching my forehead. “Mom.. I’m river… not alley” I scream one more time and now I sound like “laura love”. “Come on… we gotta go now” my mom loses her temper and pull me out of the room. When I pass the mirror next to my cupboard… I saw my mom is walking with a blonde pony-tailed girl.

I get shocked, "Oh my God that's definitely not my body" then I decide to running away, run as fast as posible get away from this house.

-rizka- said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

I run into toilet after my mom out from my room, and got shocked for reflection on the mirror.. Gosh...it's Alley's face on the mirror, not me. Spontaneously I insert my hand into my pants, "Holy shit, even I lost my little brother"
I walk out from toilet, get back to my room, try to look more carefully every point of this room and found that this is not my room, I didn't recognize this room at all, "Oh my God......".

"Where am I? Who am I? Ain't I River? Am I dreaming?", I poke my own cheek and..."Ouch..it's real then. What happened to me?"

In between my confusion, Mommy's shouting "Alley...it's almost 8 o'clock. You'll be late to school. Don't makes me come to your room again"

I shout like a girl, "Okay, Moooom," before my feet move on, I realize something in my window reflection, I groan deeply in a boy's voice, "Oh, my God! It's me. I can see myself there, River! So where is Alley now?"

And i see that reflection in front of me, a young-tall-guy with a pale face and that brown dangling hair standing there and those eyes green weary eyes..they stare at me, as if asking me for help. "who are you??" i forced myself to ask him, but all i can hear is a deep boy voice and i still see him, pronounces the words that i say. "River.." i can't stop my lip saying that. but those eyes..

"River..." the whispering sound fills my head..i want to move my feet on, but i stand still, cannot resist the green eyes glare.

"River, are you okay?" Mom's voice behind my back surprises me a lot, "I think you're not okay. Better see the doctor soon," she grasps my hand tightly as if she wants to detect my sickness.

"My God, River, you...you...don't have any pulse in your hand..?!!"

I feel shocked for a second and then laugh so loud till i forgot the whispering for a moment, "Moomm...that's because you're holding the wrong part of my hand, there's no any pulse in people's arm."

"Ooops, it's a mistake," Mom looks too worry about me, "But your face is pale, Alley! Are you okay?"
‘Alley?’… what is it now…. I think this disease is contagious.. n now it’s my mom’s turn.. “Mom are you okay?” I chocked up,, what is wrong with my voice… I sound more like screaming now. “Alley honnie… I think we’d better get the doctor soon” said my mom now touching my forehead. “Mom.. I’m river… not alley” I scream one more time and now I sound like “laura love”. “Come on… we gotta go now” my mom loses her temper and pull me out of the room. When I pass the mirror next to my cupboard… I saw my mom is walking with a blonde pony-tailed girl.

I get shocked, "Oh my God that's definitely not my body" then I decide to running away, run as fast as possible get away from this house. I slam the front door, run away and cross the boulevard, and nearly collide a passing car.

Eriek Sobieski said...

07.00

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

I run into toilet after my mom out from my room, and got shocked for reflection on the mirror.. Gosh...it's Alley's face on the mirror, not me. Spontaneously I insert my hand into my pants, "Holy shit, even I lost my little brother"
I walk out from toilet, get back to my room, try to look more carefully every point of this room and found that this is not my room, I didn't recognize this room at all, "Oh my God......".

"Where am I? Who am I? Ain't I River? Am I dreaming?", I poke my own cheek and..."Ouch..it's real then. What happened to me?"

In between my confusion, Mommy's shouting "Alley...it's almost 8 o'clock. You'll be late to school. Don't makes me come to your room again"

I shout like a girl, "Okay, Moooom," before my feet move on, I realize something in my window reflection, I groan deeply in a boy's voice, "Oh, my God! It's me. I can see myself there, River! So where is Alley now?"

And i see that reflection in front of me, a young-tall-guy with a pale face and that brown dangling hair standing there and those eyes green weary eyes..they stare at me, as if asking me for help. "who are you??" i forced myself to ask him, but all i can hear is a deep boy voice and i still see him, pronounces the words that i say. "River.." i can't stop my lip saying that. but those eyes..

"River..." the whispering sound fills my head..i want to move my feet on, but i stand still, cannot resist the green eyes glare.

"River, are you okay?" Mom's voice behind my back surprises me a lot, "I think you're not okay. Better see the doctor soon," she grasps my hand tightly as if she wants to detect my sickness.

"My God, River, you...you...don't have any pulse in your hand..?!!"

I feel shocked for a second and then laugh so loud till i forgot the whispering for a moment, "Moomm...that's because you're holding the wrong part of my hand, there's no any pulse in people's arm."

"Ooops, it's a mistake," Mom looks too worry about me, "But your face is pale, Alley! Are you okay?"
‘Alley?’… what is it now…. I think this disease is contagious.. n now it’s my mom’s turn.. “Mom are you okay?” I chocked up,, what is wrong with my voice… I sound more like screaming now. “Alley honnie… I think we’d better get the doctor soon” said my mom now touching my forehead. “Mom.. I’m river… not alley” I scream one more time and now I sound like “laura love”. “Come on… we gotta go now” my mom loses her temper and pull me out of the room. When I pass the mirror next to my cupboard… I saw my mom is walking with a blonde pony-tailed girl.

I get shocked, "Oh my God that's definitely not my body" then I decide to running away, run as fast as possible get away from this house. I slam the front door, run away and cross the boulevard, and nearly collide a passing car.

"Riveeer, where the hell are you goiiiiiing?" my mom shouts along with chasing after me, but her age cannot reach her power, so she decides to stop running and take a deep breath, "Alleeeeey, don't do thiiiiis, pleeeeeease!"

ngupil itu indah said...

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

I run into toilet after my mom out from my room, and got shocked for reflection on the mirror.. Gosh...it's Alley's face on the mirror, not me. Spontaneously I insert my hand into my pants, "Holy shit, even I lost my little brother"
I walk out from toilet, get back to my room, try to look more carefully every point of this room and found that this is not my room, I didn't recognize this room at all, "Oh my God......".

"Where am I? Who am I? Ain't I River? Am I dreaming?", I poke my own cheek and..."Ouch..it's real then. What happened to me?"

In between my confusion, Mommy's shouting "Alley...it's almost 8 o'clock. You'll be late to school. Don't makes me come to your room again"

I shout like a girl, "Okay, Moooom," before my feet move on, I realize something in my window reflection, I groan deeply in a boy's voice, "Oh, my God! It's me. I can see myself there, River! So where is Alley now?"

And i see that reflection in front of me, a young-tall-guy with a pale face and that brown dangling hair standing there and those eyes green weary eyes..they stare at me, as if asking me for help. "who are you??" i forced myself to ask him, but all i can hear is a deep boy voice and i still see him, pronounces the words that i say. "River.." i can't stop my lip saying that. but those eyes..

"River..." the whispering sound fills my head..i want to move my feet on, but i stand still, cannot resist the green eyes glare.

"River, are you okay?" Mom's voice behind my back surprises me a lot, "I think you're not okay. Better see the doctor soon," she grasps my hand tightly as if she wants to detect my sickness.

"My God, River, you...you...don't have any pulse in your hand..?!!"

I feel shocked for a second and then laugh so loud till i forgot the whispering for a moment, "Moomm...that's because you're holding the wrong part of my hand, there's no any pulse in people's arm."

"Ooops, it's a mistake," Mom looks too worry about me, "But your face is pale, Alley! Are you okay?"
‘Alley?’… what is it now…. I think this disease is contagious.. n now it’s my mom’s turn.. “Mom are you okay?” I chocked up,, what is wrong with my voice… I sound more like screaming now. “Alley honnie… I think we’d better get the doctor soon” said my mom now touching my forehead. “Mom.. I’m river… not alley” I scream one more time and now I sound like “laura love”. “Come on… we gotta go now” my mom loses her temper and pull me out of the room. When I pass the mirror next to my cupboard… I saw my mom is walking with a blonde pony-tailed girl.

I get shocked, "Oh my God that's definitely not my body" then I decide to running away, run as fast as possible get away from this house. I slam the front door, run away and cross the boulevard, and nearly collide a passing car.

"Riveeer, where the hell are you goiiiiiing?" my mom shouts along with chasing after me, but her age cannot reach her power, so she decides to stop running and take a deep breath, "Alleeeeey, don't do thiiiiis, pleeeeeease!"

"today is your schedule to have your weekly check up in the mental institution!!!"

That words make me freeze and stop me from running, well actualy it confused me even more.
I look back to my mom with a look confusing on my face "say..what..?"

but before i heard anything from her, suddenly, out of no where, a car with a full speed coming at me, it was very fast, i can't even had my chance to blink, my mom's voice screaming for my name and the screaming sounds of the car's wheels on the street sounds not too loud compared to the sounds of my thought in my head that saying repeteadly...i'm gonna dead...i'm gonna dead..i'm gonna dead...

then, when the car almost hit me, i closed my eyes.

suddenly everything's is so quiet.i can not hear anything, there's no sounds of my mom screaming and there's no sounds the wheels of the car on the street.

am..am..i dead now?,

i open my eyes slowly..

and i see everything around me is literaly freezing, they are all stop moving, my mom, the car, thebird on the sky, the falling leaves, they are all not moving...

ow my god..is this for real? or am i now officialy crazy?

"ya..yattaaa...?" i whisper softly while awkwardly raising my hands confusingly

online debate said...

I'm stuck here in my room, stay awake a whole night. To be honest, I'm scared to get the same nightmare as last days before. The nightmare of despair and undefined agony. Suddenly, the door is opened.

"Hey, Mom! I think I'm getting sick today so i can't go to school," I said to Mom in the edge of the door. She walks to the side of my bed, says nothing yet just stares at me through her glasses. Then she moves to the window, opens the window and says "Get up from your bed, you have to go to school!!"

"But i really not feel very well mom, maybe i have to go to doctor" i said that word with my pale face.

Mom exhales the deep breath while staring at me, "Ok then if you are truly getting sick today, but one thing you have to remember, I just want you to be honest with me and you don't need any reason to be lazy at home. Now ... I doubtfully think that you're not OK at school, right?"

"Things are just fine at school. Nothing to worried about. Now could you please let me be here alone for a moment?" I asked her politely while i'm trying to hide my wretched look.

While she walks out from my room, she said "OK, but don't forget to have breakfast."

"OK, Mom. I'll be out soon," I said when she slowly vanished through dark corridor out of my room.

I sweep my eyes around the room, try to find something. I saw a dark shadow but I can't describe what it's loook like. Then, before i can desribe what it is... suddenly, something jump into me.

"Aaahhh..there you are", i feel relieved to see that it is my chameleon. I know that Mom always forbid me not to keep any pets in my room, moreover it was a reptile.
I like this chameleon and I called this 'little chamee'.

"Little chamme...last night i had a really bad dream. I'm scared". I take a deep sigh, "I walk alone to the city. Then I hear something is screaming from the distance. I run in rush to that voice. Then I see you turn into a giant terrifying monster and try to get me. I run along, shrieking, ask for help, but everyone seems so indifferent. No one help me"

Kraaaaaak, the voice coming through my window makes me little scared, "Who's there?" then I walk quietly until reaching the window and I see a beggar with black veil covers her face. She's seems familiar to me, but i'm sure i've never meet her before. I try to remember more and more but I'm still sure that I've never meet her, "Ugh.....My head. It hurts, what happen to my head. Somebody....help me...."
I grasp the curtain cursing for pain in my head, and feel faint suddenly.

I can't feel anything but I can hear my mother cry next to me and say "Oh my daughter... What happen to you? Please open your eyes.."
I try open my eyes slowly, even it's feel really heavy.... wondering where am i right now?
But can't see anything, just see a dark "Oh my god, where am I? Mommy.... Where are you? What's happen to me? I can't see anything. Mommy......."

The shadow comes to me, and suddenly I wake up from the nightmare when Mom grabs my hand and says, "Alley, have you ever listened to me what I said? What time is it? Should I remind you about going to school everyday? Come on, wake up! Up, up, up, and then go to your school. You've already late"

I open my eyes lazily, half shouted and feel disturbed, "Why did you call me Alley? I'm not my twin sister. I'm River. Why can't people recognize me? In both dream and real life they thought me as a girl!".

Mom look at me with little smile "That's because you are my little DAUGHTER and I'm quite sure -as your mother- that you didn't have any twin sister/brother my dear.....come on...let's get up.. you sleepy head" and she kiss me on my forehead gentlely

Oh my God, who am I exactly? I got confused of everything, I truly know that I'm River, not Alley, am I insane or my mom hallucinates?

I run into toilet after my mom out from my room, and got shocked for reflection on the mirror.. Gosh...it's Alley's face on the mirror, not me. Spontaneously I insert my hand into my pants, "Holy shit, even I lost my little brother"
I walk out from toilet, get back to my room, try to look more carefully every point of this room and found that this is not my room, I didn't recognize this room at all, "Oh my God......".

"Where am I? Who am I? Ain't I River? Am I dreaming?", I poke my own cheek and..."Ouch..it's real then. What happened to me?"

In between my confusion, Mommy's shouting "Alley...it's almost 8 o'clock. You'll be late to school. Don't makes me come to your room again"

I shout like a girl, "Okay, Moooom," before my feet move on, I realize something in my window reflection, I groan deeply in a boy's voice, "Oh, my God! It's me. I can see myself there, River! So where is Alley now?"

And i see that reflection in front of me, a young-tall-guy with a pale face and that brown dangling hair standing there and those eyes green weary eyes..they stare at me, as if asking me for help. "who are you??" i forced myself to ask him, but all i can hear is a deep boy voice and i still see him, pronounces the words that i say. "River.." i can't stop my lip saying that. but those eyes..

"River..." the whispering sound fills my head..i want to move my feet on, but i stand still, cannot resist the green eyes glare.

"River, are you okay?" Mom's voice behind my back surprises me a lot, "I think you're not okay. Better see the doctor soon," she grasps my hand tightly as if she wants to detect my sickness.

"My God, River, you...you...don't have any pulse in your hand..?!!"

I feel shocked for a second and then laugh so loud till i forgot the whispering for a moment, "Moomm...that's because you're holding the wrong part of my hand, there's no any pulse in people's arm."

"Ooops, it's a mistake," Mom looks too worry about me, "But your face is pale, Alley! Are you okay?"
‘Alley?’… what is it now…. I think this disease is contagious.. n now it’s my mom’s turn.. “Mom are you okay?” I chocked up,, what is wrong with my voice… I sound more like screaming now. “Alley honnie… I think we’d better get the doctor soon” said my mom now touching my forehead. “Mom.. I’m river… not alley” I scream one more time and now I sound like “laura love”. “Come on… we gotta go now” my mom loses her temper and pull me out of the room. When I pass the mirror next to my cupboard… I saw my mom is walking with a blonde pony-tailed girl.

I get shocked, "Oh my God that's definitely not my body" then I decide to running away, run as fast as possible get away from this house. I slam the front door, run away and cross the boulevard, and nearly collide a passing car.

"Riveeer, where the hell are you goiiiiiing?" my mom shouts along with chasing after me, but her age cannot reach her power, so she decides to stop running and take a deep breath, "Alleeeeey, don't do thiiiiis, pleeeeeease!"

"today is your schedule to have your weekly check up in the mental institution!!!"

That words make me freeze and stop me from running, well actualy it confused me even more.
I look back to my mom with a look confusing on my face "say..what..?"

but before i heard anything from her, suddenly, out of no where, a car with a full speed coming at me, it was very fast, i can't even had my chance to blink, my mom's voice screaming for my name and the screaming sounds of the car's wheels on the street sounds not too loud compared to the sounds of my thought in my head that saying repeteadly...i'm gonna dead...i'm gonna dead..i'm gonna dead...

then, when the car almost hit me, i closed my eyes.

suddenly everything's is so quiet.i can not hear anything, there's no sounds of my mom screaming and there's no sounds the wheels of the car on the street.

am..am..i dead now?,

i open my eyes slowly..

and i see everything around me is literaly freezing, they are all stop moving, my mom, the car, thebird on the sky, the falling leaves, they are all not moving...

ow my god..is this for real? or am i now officialy crazy?

"ya..yattaaa...?" i whisper softly while awkwardly raising my hands confusingly

I still don't believe my eyes, so I close my eyes but when i open my eyes again,...surprisingly I found I'm lying on the hospital bed with my hands and legs tied on the bed, beside my bed..stands these two nurses and a doctor with a needle in his hand "now.., this won't hurt a bit" said the doctor. one of the nurses bring a book that seems to be a book to note the progress of the patient, on the cover of that book I can see some texts which said "mental institution medical progress book".